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Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Sat Jun 22, 2013 12:22 pm

I know my art are tragic, but I'd like to share them with you for advices. I beg your tolerant and pardon because I am only a secondary one student, and also for the very poor quality. Please give advices for me to improve! Also, you are free to mock.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby Gervais » Sat Jun 22, 2013 6:47 pm

"Feel free to mock?" Why should I, when that's much better than mine? :mrgreen: I love how you did Enjolras' clothes, especially, and I'm sorry that I'm not able to give any advice.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby Acaila » Sat Jun 22, 2013 7:18 pm

I'm not really arty, but I like them! :) Proportions seem very good.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby IBelieveInYou » Sat Jun 22, 2013 8:44 pm

Are you kidding me? I wish i could draw like that! They are gorgeous! Go on, put some color! :D
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Their foreheads turn pale and dissolve in front of me,
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby YoungStudentMarius » Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:56 pm

It looks really great, Musicalfan! And I'm not sure what advice to offer except that it might be easier to see all your great detail if you darkened the lines a bit, but I really like it. :D And oh, color would be cool! But I know sometimes it's terribly hard to add.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Sun Jun 23, 2013 1:46 pm

Thank you for all of your comments and advices. After I have finished it, I think it's bad, especically on the details. So thank you, again.
I will try colour it without ruin it in my free time and darken some lines because it is only a draft. And I think I have to work more harder on the details, they're hard to draw.

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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Tue Jun 25, 2013 1:03 pm

I draw another fan art about Jean Prouvaire this time. Sorry for the poor quality, again.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:35 am

I always imagine the characters from Les Mis has became animals, and I found some people think Enj is a unicorn, so I did this:
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Any idea of what animal will the character be? I will draw it out.

(Sorry for the wings! I just can't resist... :oops: )

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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Mon Jul 08, 2013 6:58 am

Finally finished ruinning it. Aren't it horrible? So mock if you want.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby YoungStudentMarius » Mon Jul 08, 2013 7:00 am

Oh, my goodness, Musicalfan, I even love it so much more in color. :shock: Beautiful job, and quit feeling ashamed. :wink:
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby Morgan » Mon Jul 08, 2013 7:31 am

It's really not mockable, it's good, silly. I really like your shading on the flag and Enjolras's jacket especially (they look really 3D), and how you've done their hair. Oooh, and super nice job on the cravats!
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby MamzelleCombeferre » Mon Jul 08, 2013 8:53 pm

Musicalfan, there is absolutely no reason for anyone to mock these! The proportions are excellent, and they look great in black and white, but even better in color! Thanks for sharing these with us!
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Tue Jul 16, 2013 7:37 am

Thinking about the background.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby YoungStudentMarius » Tue Jul 16, 2013 5:33 pm

Oh, wow, musicalfan, it's gorgeous! :shock: It really looks like Sam Barks, too, and I think you got the arms especially really perfectly.

And, as to a background...I'm not sure, but you did base it off the movie, so maybe something dark, kind of like the streets? And if you think you could, you could always add rain in the background, that would be pretty cool, I think. But really, it looks very, very nice already.
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Re: Any Advice?

Postby musicalfan » Wed Jul 24, 2013 8:13 am

Hope I don't ruin it.
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