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Postby TheRandomPhangirl » Sun Apr 21, 2013 2:32 am

*fic has been deleted because I now hate this story and have the self-confidence of a piece of rock*
Last edited by TheRandomPhangirl on Sun Jun 16, 2013 7:22 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby Gervais » Sun Apr 21, 2013 2:43 am

Disregard my question in the Mu(in)sain, please.

Well, that was depressing, you didn't lie. :( But it was also somewhat fluffy and well-written and beautiful, and I just want to hug Enjolras now.
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby TheRandomPhangirl » Sun Apr 21, 2013 2:45 am

Thank you hon! I need to edit the living hell out of it, but I think I'll do that when I'm in my right mind i.e not half asleep.
I don't think it came out too bad for about half an hour of word-vomit.
And I want to hug both of them, but Combeferre would probably push me away. :wink:
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby Aurelia Combeferre » Sun Apr 21, 2013 3:52 am

Poor Combeferre! Now I don't know what disease would make him do that; it sure isn't consumption, sounds like far, far worse.

But anyway I want to see what happens next. Is there anything next? Poor Enjolras.
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby TheRandomPhangirl » Sun Apr 21, 2013 9:53 am

Thanks Aurelia!
It started out as an advanced form of yellow fever, but then I got a bit carried away. Hence why I'm going to edit it, like, now. (I left out the jaundice bit. Doi) :x

I have some ideas for a funeral and aftermath, some of which I have written, but none of them really connect with each other yet, so maybe, but I don't know yet. *shrug*
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby MllePatrie » Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:40 pm

Well, that was depressing even for your writing. I can't really talk, but I think you should have developed the illness a bit more, it would have made it seem more realistic. And perhaps we cold have seen more of a decline in Combeferre if it were more spaced out time wise. That way, it would have been more wrenching.
Still, I'm glad that you finally posted it, and you need far more confidence, my dear.
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Re: A High Price; Combeferre/Enjolras; T; 1/1

Postby TheRandomPhangirl » Mon May 06, 2013 1:37 pm

Confidence? What is this confidence you speak of? I know not the term!
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Re: Deleted Fanfic

Postby MllePatrie » Tue Jul 09, 2013 9:58 pm

Oh you deleted it! :,(
"Citizens," cried Enjolras, and in his voice there was almost an angry tremor, "the Republic is not rich enough in men to incur useless expenditures."


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